Rhetoric Does Not Mean Fiction: What Arbroath Reveals About Medieval Scottish Learning

The Declaration of Arbroath is a work of learned persuasion. Its writers drew on ancient history, Christian scripture and inherited chronicles to argue for Scotland's freedom. Calling that work rhetorical describes a skill and a purpose; it does not settle whether any particular historical claim is true.

That is the useful starting point for reading this remarkable letter. Behind its defiance are people who knew how to turn books into a political argument. To see their craft, follow three threads: a Roman appeal for liberty, biblical models of leadership, and a medieval account of the Scottish past.

A letter with a job to do

Dated 6 April 1320, the letter speaks for named nobles, other barons and freeholders, and the community of the Scottish realm. Its recipient was Pope John XXII. It sought recognition of Scottish independence and Robert Bruce's lawful kingship. National Records of Scotland places it within a diplomatic campaign during the war with England: winning at Bannockburn had not resolved the struggle for recognition. See the NRS account of the document's setting.

Read with that audience in mind, the combination of reverence and resolve makes sense. The writers needed to persuade someone with authority to act. Their choices of history, sacred language and political argument belong to that task. The heat of the letter is part of its construction.

What rhetoric meant in a world of manuscripts

Rhetoric belonged to the trivium, alongside grammar and logic: the first part of an arts course, as the Cambridge University Library glossary explains. It was a learned discipline. A well-shaped argument was something to study and practise.

The wider setting matters too. Cambridge's manuscript exhibition describes medieval learning carried through chronicles, commentaries, encyclopaedias and other books. Students, scholars and texts moved between centres of learning; teaching included the seven liberal arts. Its account of medieval knowledge and science shows a connected intellectual world.

That provides context, rather than a school record for Arbroath's drafter. We cannot infer a particular person's education from a general curriculum. We can ask what the letter itself reveals: which authorities appear, how they are used, and what changes when their language enters a new argument.

A Roman sentence finds a Scottish purpose

The Scottish History Society identifies a close borrowing from Sallust's War with Catiline in the famous freedom clause. The comparison is especially striking in chapter 33 of Sallust's narrative. There, a message from Gaius Manlius to Marcius Rex rejects power and riches as the object of the struggle and appeals instead to liberty, held as dearly as life.

Arbroath gives a closely related formulation a different political home. Its writers reject glory, riches and honours as their purpose, then insist on freedom. Read both passages and the relationship is audible. The Scottish History Society's guide to the letter's sources identifies the literary connection.

Borrowing did not prevent the Scottish argument from having force. The interesting question is what the writers made the inherited language do. A Roman historical text supplied words that could carry a Scottish appeal across centuries. The parallel does not identify the physical manuscript they used, or tell us whether they encountered the passage through an intermediary.

Biblical models gave the king a role

In the letter, Robert is compared with Maccabaeus and Joshua. The comparison places his struggle inside a sacred frame of deliverance. Elsewhere, the appeal invokes Saint Andrew and his relationship to Saint Peter. These are visible features of the text, not a modern attempt to add religious colour.

Our reading is that this language helped present Scotland's cause in terms suited to a papal audience. That interpretation should remain distinct from the words on the page. Readers can check the NRS Latin text and English translation. NRS cautions that its online text reconstructs the lost dispatched version; it is not an exact transcription of the surviving file copy.

A learned account can still need correction

Respect for the writers' learning does not require accepting every detail of their history. Dauvit Broun's study offers a concrete example. The Declaration dates the Scots' settlement to 1,200 years after the Red Sea crossing. Broun argues that the figure appears to descend from a copying error in a version of Henry of Huntingdon's history, where an earlier figure of 1,002 became 1,200. This is a scholarly explanation of textual transmission, not a date established for a migration. His study of Arbroath's national pedigree sets out the comparison.

One number opens a larger window: writers worked with the books and versions available to them. A confident statement can preserve both learning and an inherited error. Our separate article on Arbroath's Scythian origin claim examines what that journey establishes and what remains unproved.

Read for craft, then test the claims

The author's identity remains uncertain. NRS regards Bernard, Abbot of Arbroath, as the probable drafter; the Scottish History Society says there is no conclusive proof. The safest ground is the surviving work: a collective political voice, built with considerable literary skill.

Try reading it twice. First, follow the appeal and feel its resolve. Then pause at each historical assertion and ask what supports it. Who is speaking? Which earlier text is being used? Is the evidence for an event, for a belief, or for the way a writer persuaded an audience?

That habit gives inherited stories room to breathe while keeping our curiosity sharp. Scotland's heritage includes the strength of an argument as well as the strength of an athlete. If these questions draw you toward a living gathering, our guide to clan-tent conversations offers a welcoming place to continue. Bring your questions; shared history grows richer when we learn together.